Snow Shoveling
Jan 20, 2016 19:41
It was sunny yesterday, but today it snowed heavily again.
For sake of safety, I shoveled the snow in various places.
Actually, I wear sandals through a year, but a lot of snow got through my sandals and it was cold.
I think I was idiot.
Also, I got tired from shoveling.
I searched for shoveling later, and it was found that the knack is to use whole your body, and not to twist your torso.
For sake of safety, I shoveled the snow in various places.
Actually, I wear sandals through a year, but a lot of snow got through my sandals and it was cold.
I think I was idiot.
Also, I got tired from shoveling.
I searched for shoveling later, and it was found that the knack is to use whole your body, and not to twist your torso.
雪かき
昨日は晴れましたが、今日はまた大雪でした。
そして安全のため、色々なところを雪かきしました。
実は私は一年中サンダルなのですが、雪かき中に雪が染みこんできて寒かったです。
馬鹿だったと思います。
そして雪かきはとても疲れました。
後で雪かきについて調べたところ、体をひねらず体全体を使うのがコツだそうです。
昨日は晴れましたが、今日はまた大雪でした。
そして安全のため、色々なところを雪かきしました。
実は私は一年中サンダルなのですが、雪かき中に雪が染みこんできて寒かったです。
馬鹿だったと思います。
そして雪かきはとても疲れました。
後で雪かきについて調べたところ、体をひねらず体全体を使うのがコツだそうです。
No. 1 myra's correction
- It was sunny yesterday, but today it snowed heavily again.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- For sake of safety, I shoveled the snow in various places.
- For safety`s sake, I shoveled the snow in various places.
- I think I was idiot.
- I think I was an idiot.
- Also, I got tired from shoveling.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I searched for shoveling later, and it was found that the knack is to use whole your body, and not to twist your torso.
- I searched about shoveling later, and I found out that the trick is to use whole your body, and not to twist your torso.
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 outdoors's correction
- Snow Shoveling
- Shoveling Snow
- Actually, I wear sandals through a year, but a lot of snow got through my sandals and it was cold.
- Actually, I wear sandals throughout the a year, but a lot of snow got through in my sandals and it was cold.
- I searched for shoveling later, and it was found that the knack is to use whole your body, and not to twist your torso.
- I did a(n internet) searched for about shoveling later, and it was I found out that the knack is to use whole your body, and not to twist your torso.
whew
kanotown
Thank you very much for the corrections! :)
Thank you very much for the corrections! :)
No. 3 スイちゃん's correction
熱帯に住んでいる私は雪かきの経験がなく、雪さえ見たことがありません。しかし、湿った雪はとても重いと聞いたことがあります。雪かきは大変そうですね。
kanotown
Thank you for the comment :)
そうですね、湿った雪はとても重いです。そして車や人の足で踏み固められた雪をかくのはとても大変です。でも、乾いた雪はふわふわで気持ちいいですよ。
Thank you for the comment :)
そうですね、湿った雪はとても重いです。そして車や人の足で踏み固められた雪をかくのはとても大変です。でも、乾いた雪はふわふわで気持ちいいですよ。
No. 4 Sharu's correction
- For sake of safety, I shoveled the snow in various places.
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For sake of safety, I shoveled the snow in various places.
Just to be safe / to be on the safer side : just an option
- Actually, I wear sandals through a year, but a lot of snow got through my sandals and it was cold.
- Actually, I always wear sandals, but a lot of snow got through (my sandals)them and it was cold.
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting me! :)
Thank you so much for correcting me! :)